Excellent job, as always.
My only comment is more about the structure of your previews....
Since the YSU QBs and
OSU QBs will never be on the field at the same time, nor will they play directly against each other, I could care less about comparing them to see who has "the edge". It is an absolute meaningless bit of trivia--and a subjective one at that. The only edge that matters is who will win each match up out on the field.
You would be better served by giving a grade and a summary for the position, but then tying up the preview with who gets the edge when going head to head. The obvious examples would be offense vs. defense, O Line vs. D Line, Secondary vs. Receivers. That would make for a much more interesting and much more relevant analysis than some hypothetical QB vs QB matchup. E.g., "However talented YSU's star DT Savage is, we can't see him beating Cordle or Rehring on very many meaningful occasions. Edge:
OSU."